mastermalpass's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Deport Me Scotty]

One way of making a spaceship funny.

I just found it hillarious when the engines went "Puff!" It's not really somehting you expect the enterprise to do. lol

[RcR: Domain]

not bad.

Plot's nothing outta the ordinary, but the animation reminded me of Double Dragon, and that's probably why I like this. Sure the sounds aren't great, theres no speech and the effects need work. But overall the movie has... Potential.

Flash-Gamers responds:

Hey thanks alot. I can't draw effects for some reason....maybe I should start trying to draw some.

[Growing An Arm]

For a first flash,

That is impressive, the drawing's ok. the animations not too bad. If you ask me one main thing you have to worjk on is speed. Perhaps just rasing the fps of this movie would just make it appeal more. Other than that it appears that you have the potential to learn everything else as you go along.

Darktayle responds:

Since I'm getting the frame comment a lot, I think I'll go and edit it now. Thanks for the advice.

[twisted tale haunted hary]

Poor.

Yeah you've done alright with the focusing and the shaders. but the animation and artwork still needs a lot of work and the plot, dam can't you come up with something at least remotely orriginal?

[Awesome Grounds]

You may have a point.

In what you're saying. Egoraptor does crudelly drawn melodamatic whacky cartoons but that is the whole fun of it.

You flash however uses 2frames of animation on each scene if any animation is used at all. there's no movement. it's just a little bit of crude voice acting. If you want to put a point into animation. Put more effort into the animation and art itself.

AshfordPride responds:

No.

[Ambulo]

Weird.

All it is a simple show of a guy walking throug scenery. Maybe it's the old school game music that I like about it. It just brings back memories of the SEGA Master System. I don't know what others will say, but I like this.

[Minute Waltz - Life Water]

Not bad at all.

For a very simply animimated and abstractly drawn flash, the idea and music puts the life into it all. I like it.

[Fruit Force 2]

You've got your skills sorted

Now put it all into a plot line and add music and more sound. You could do a lot better.

viliux27 responds:

Dude Ep. 1
When the cursor killed cherry they started this battle...This is the plotline.
Also music could do good for me :)

[Killers history]

Although this isn't good at all,

You do have the potential to make something that is. Your art and animation skills are good enough to make something better if you add some music, speed it up, an have a decent plot line.

I blammed this submission as I know you can do far better than this.

ninjitashistory responds:

thats the spirit!!!my father do the same tells me that i suck,but really he is proud of me.

[My Tank]

Not bad

It's an ok video. The only improvements I can see are as follows:
More detail to yuor animation - you need to put a little more work into it, such as when the tank fires a cannon ball, you could add a blast with some smoke and stuff rather than just a small hole. Think about it and see what better you may do.

rezic responds:

Yeah, I know, I'm gonna look at some tutorials on effects and stuff and upload it again. Thanks for the input!