mastermalpass's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome Grounds]

You may have a point.

In what you're saying. Egoraptor does crudelly drawn melodamatic whacky cartoons but that is the whole fun of it.

You flash however uses 2frames of animation on each scene if any animation is used at all. there's no movement. it's just a little bit of crude voice acting. If you want to put a point into animation. Put more effort into the animation and art itself.

AshfordPride responds:

No.

[Fruit Force 2]

You've got your skills sorted

Now put it all into a plot line and add music and more sound. You could do a lot better.

viliux27 responds:

Dude Ep. 1
When the cursor killed cherry they started this battle...This is the plotline.
Also music could do good for me :)

[Killers history]

Although this isn't good at all,

You do have the potential to make something that is. Your art and animation skills are good enough to make something better if you add some music, speed it up, an have a decent plot line.

I blammed this submission as I know you can do far better than this.

ninjitashistory responds:

thats the spirit!!!my father do the same tells me that i suck,but really he is proud of me.

[My Tank]

Not bad

It's an ok video. The only improvements I can see are as follows:
More detail to yuor animation - you need to put a little more work into it, such as when the tank fires a cannon ball, you could add a blast with some smoke and stuff rather than just a small hole. Think about it and see what better you may do.

rezic responds:

Yeah, I know, I'm gonna look at some tutorials on effects and stuff and upload it again. Thanks for the input!

[LCCE teaser]

I'm already looking forward to the full version!

The battle graphics and animation you have a superior to that of even Xiao Xiao. If you make a whole battle scene with lots of combat, then you will have beaten the legendry xiao xiao. Maybe some 3d parts but you don't need them. Keep up the good work! :)

Ace0fredspades responds:

thanx so much!!!

[Blood Harvest [Psy]]

I never thought a random violence stick movie...

...would be so good! I am very impressed with this, and I can definately see it getting to front page. Great work, I hope it is just as good in the next episode.

The-claww responds:

Thanks mister! :D

And yeah im hoping to make the next episode more old computer friendly, and add more action.

[Bad Flash Kills]

lol brilliant!

At first I was sonderign where they were goign with their conversation then they sudden;y run into a badly drawn character... I just started laughing especially when it started moving and the knights were describing it... mainly because it's all true!

RSQViper responds:

The funniest things in life are true things.

Glad you liked it!

[My Adventure]

That ended too early

You hadn't really given your animation a time to develop much of a scence there. You need to extend it, improve your animation and drawing.

Steff responds:

Pffft, retardation.

[Blobby's story 1]

Not bad.

Kinda liked it, pretty basic but nice plot, ok animation, and acceptable modeling. Plenty of room for improvement but such improvements will probably come with your experience in stop frame claymation.

ATOMICCLOUD responds:

I made it a while ago, but i have improved!
Check out my other stuff:D

[Why did this even pass?]

Rather interesting. point.

I voted 5 / 5 to keep it on the site. as you have made a good point.

TheSoulMan responds:

well