mastermalpass's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SW: Extravaganza]

Impressive.

I look forward to seeing it.

[Awesome Video Games Ep14]

the next smosh bros?

Wwell, we can always have another smosh. I mean, you're no way near as good as smosh, but you can be funny, in a different way. keep working on your stuff.

[Turtle Park Massacre]

Nice, but needs some speed.

The gore graphics and pistol animation were very good. But you need to make it faster, have more life in the people getting attacked. and make that batting a lot less repetetive and more savage! :D

[:the Composer:]

Keep it up.

This is a truly amazing piece of art work. And notice how I say Art, and not flash. Because it is a story that is told through music, and tells about music.

We need more work like this on the portals.

[Subordinate Droids 2]

Not bad...

It was well animated, and the sound was of good quailty... But the plot was just a bit too cliche don't you agree?

sorbitol responds:

No. Please elaborate.

[Omega Project: Breakout!]

Keep working on it, you're doing well.

Very good for a first stick figure animation. Keep up the good work, and I hope you improve even more.

Try experimenting with other effects. Rob Denblaker's 'Joe Zombie' started of OK, and is now an amzing series as he improved.

manicmonkeydrummer responds:

Thanks dude! I love the joe zombie's I'd love to be able to make stuff like that

[Rainbow Gradient]

Don't let your good skills go to waste

you can animate well, and could make some thing pretty good out of it. Could you put a bit more time into something and make some thing good please? Because, this isn't too great.

irrelivent responds:

:,(

You make me sad, mister.

[Awesome Compilation Vol 2]

Suppose it was better than Awesome Compilation v1.

Bu you're losing it a bit. Let's just take a look at what you've done so far.
Metal Gear Awesome: It was some thing New, has us all in stitches, it wasn't that short, or long. It had alot of scenes from the actuall game that viewers would recognized, and then exaggerate them for laughter, that was great.

Awesome the Hedgehog: It was pretty funny, but very short, Had it's references to the real game and all, but left us feeling like we didn't get enough.

Awesome compilation Volume 1:
The Mario one was the funniest, but alot of it all didn't make much sense, there were alot less references to the movies, and the Pacman one almost turned into a sitcom.

Awesome Compilation Volume 2 (this one):
Better than the first one, But still they were all too short, and their jokes were no way near as good as the ones in your first Awesome flash. The The Legend of Awesome was too repetitive, and didn't have that many great jokes. The 'what if video game characters were real' one didn't have enough references, and it was all too short.

Above all, I think you need to re-look at what made your Masterpiece - Metal gear awesome, the great popular flash it is. and use those aspects in your next Awesome flash.

Good luck on your next one.

[Nintegaball GT: Ep. 1]

Good, but simalar to another running series.

Like Lyrad666 says; it is a lot like super Mario bros Z. But keep working on it, and it'll be a fmous with the users.

[Robots: stop motion]

It was alright.

The animation was good, the figures were well made. All you really needed was a better story.